I think i can improve my mechanics in my paper. I need to make sure that i am using the same tense throughout the whole paper. I also can improve in my description of how i set up my survey and how i will get IUP students to take it. I have touch on it already but i think i can be more specific. I can state how i can keep bias responses from my paper. I think my survey can be more specific, asking ages and ethnicities.
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